Submission 26691

Here’s to you rolling well enough with what life has dealt you, Ann, by way of cfs, and your ability to energy up enough to consistently write lyrics–that you apparently enjoy doing and are good at–despite that diagnosis. Bravo to you! I think you nicely captured in your entry here @tanyaw ‘s “good days, bad days” theme well and worked it as your own. Some nice images in this one. Loved your work in of a rollercoaster and how it metaphorically links/hints at a condition like that of cfs to it all by way of that racing up and down amusement park ride–clever show, not tell! And hooky in a sense, too, is how adapting and overcoming your life cfs issues reveal in this lyric’s early lines, and bloom in a rectifying mantra of: “One day (or moment) at a time.”